Question

This is for the weary,whose hearts be dreary;
The tired and the burdened
who've lost their courage and need to be strengthened.

Dawn of a new day's light may seem dull.
Yet the darkest of shadows it will compel.

But know that all have seen their share of skulls.
Do not despair
Mend your broken will, your wounds, time will repair.

Sharpen your blades, chisel the rust off your armor.
Look up, your battle is for mi Amor.
Stand your ground, batt your chest and release a tremor.
Let your foot steps quake.
Let your enemies shudder.
Yesterdays battle was lost. But today, we conquer.

Answer 1

Did you write that??

Answer 2

omg amazing love it !~!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 3

i need to change the last sentence lol not enough impact haha

Answer 4

Yes tanya :)

Answer 5

I dedicate it to SAXON

Answer 6

That is amazing! :)

Answer 7

>_> I didnt expect this reaction :O

Answer 8

you guys are too nice haha

Answer 9

You're really good at that :)
Keep it up :)

Answer 10

It's soo well written!! your poem has the achievement of beauty and delicacy. Great Job!

Answer 11

I chagned it!! tanya read it now!

Answer 12

it sounds great good job

Answer 13

tyy queen :) i hope saxon reads tho!

Answer 14

Dan wrote a battle poem.. v.v I may have to write a new one now.

Answer 15

sweet ^

Answer 16

hahaha doo itt

Answer 17

yall wanna read mines

Answer 18

sure =]

Answer 19

thanx

Answer 20

http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/53b88a84e4b072c759d9c3f2

Answer 21

\(\large\cal\color{blue}{WOW!}\color{magenta}{Amazing!}\) @dan815

Answer 22

\[\large\color \red {THANK~~~ YOU:))}\]

Answer 23

\(Well~arn't~you~guys~cool\)

Answer 24

@sahrya @Somy @Loser66

Answer 25

@abb0t @Squirrels
my poem for abb0t

Answer 26

this is the most disgusting piece of literature, it looks delicious tho. good job. i i give you 10 out of 69 koalas

Answer 27

69 out of 10*

Answer 28

@dan check my last work :3
http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/53ba1814e4b02cb280b8a84d