Question

https://soundcloud.com/jigglypuff314/pandora-hearts-lacie
The music box melody Lacie from the anime Pandora Hearts.
Played on flute my me :P
it's the first time I've tried to do a duet with myself lol what do you think? suitable for me or should I go back to doing my complicated solos? xD

Answer 1

WHY ARE YOU SO AMAZING

Answer 2

Wow! Thats really impressive! It sounds amazing!

Answer 3

didnt think it'd be good but you've proven me wrong

Answer 4

Good on yah :D

Answer 5

thanks you all :)
<3

Answer 6

do you mind if i use this for an Audio Book Im Making??

Answer 7

@WhisperZ umm sure I don't mind ^_^

Answer 8

tone is too brashy, the song is supposed to be bittersweet
find a quieter place to record, there's interference in the background
0:03 cracked a note
0:12 breath is too loud
0:13 the timing there is off
0:16 the note didn't come out, try a different articulation
0:17 again with the breath
0:31 ew now that tuning is horrible ugh
0:40 rhythm is wrong
0:53 articulation too harsh, I can hear the tongue from here
1:02 wrong notes and rhythm
1:18 background interference
1:26 note change fumble
point is, don't let the complements get to your head because you have still a long way to go to even sound "good" at all.

Answer 9

Sleepyhead is just a mean person they always comment mean stuff IT"S BEAUTIFUL!
Their really just a mean person they shouldn't be aloud to answer questions

Answer 10

@TheAngleCaroll Thank you :)

and @sleepyhead314 I appreciate your honest opinion and reasons for it, I can tell that you honestly took the time to listen to my music to provide such comments, so thank you for your constructive criticism.
(although it might be more preferable to add what someone did well too, to lighten up your serious tone :P )

Answer 11

I honestly think sleepyhead is Jiggly's alternative persona xD

Answer 12

Do "The Lost Woods" Theme from Legend of Zelda

Answer 13

Yessss @TheSaint905621
Also @sleepyhead314 she didn' t ask for critque I think she did just fine :P

Answer 14

thanks :)
and since ya both asked for it, I put it here @camerondoherty
http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/531a2868e4b0108f77dafa40

Answer 15

omg it is beautiful I was crying can I play on piano

Answer 16

Wow that was impressive!

Answer 17

omg xD I know something these users don't know

Answer 18

and what might that be @beccaboo333 ? ;)

Answer 19

Sleepyhead hit most of the points for this song, but another thing I think should be mentioned is that when you play multiple parts of a song with a single instrument through the combination of tracks, the sound can become overbearing. Rather than layering to give depth, the layers instead feel like they only add sound.

A good trick to get around this is to simply adjust the octave. In this case the harmony would benefit from being played an octave lower. This would better emphasize the leading notes of the song while giving back the depth.

Answer 20

Nice job!

Answer 21

wow

Answer 22

Sleepy is a mean person >:(

YOU DID amazing Jiggly =)