Ok. I have written my first poem. What do you say about it? I know it's a little wierd..But here it is:
Welcome Guests, I have a mystery
It all ties in with history
I forgot whats it about
Cuz af all the amount.

All I know, that its a book
And I know that, cuz of a look.
It's a mystery bookI lost
Cuz I knew how much it costs.

Now guests, I have told you my whole story
And now I am sorry.
I have to give you a big fat test,
Now it's my turn to get some rest!!
What is the mystery?

Question

Ok. I have written my first poem. What do you say about it? I know it's a little wierd..But here it is:
Welcome Guests, I have a mystery
It all ties in with history
I forgot whats it about
Cuz af all the amount.

All I know, that its a book
And I know that, cuz of a look.
It's a mystery bookI lost
Cuz I knew how much it costs.

Now guests, I have told you my whole story
And now I am sorry.
I have to give you a big fat test,
Now it's my turn to get some rest!!
What is the mystery?

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

@ikram002p  @strawberrysorbet  @texaschic101  @ganeshie8  @paki  @thomaster  And others:D

anonymous · Answer

oh gosh,this is just awesome ;) wow! <3

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

Hahhahahha:D I don't know much..I just sat down and writing...And this is what came to mind:D

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

Even though I hate history! Worst thing in my life. I have made good grades...But I hate it anyways:D Thanx:D

anonymous · Answer

i think it is a very good first poem it flows through the words very smooth :)

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

Thanx!:D I didn't even believe it was going to turn out this great. Until I actually looked into it deeper after writing it. (my first one in life)!!:D yay!

ikram002p · Answer

itssss sooooo good !

sheraz12345 · Answer

That rhythm is awesome ... Way to go Yana .... Iits nice ... I'll show u mine as well... Just wait :P

ikram002p · Answer

i have a peom wanna read ?

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

Alright!!:D THanx guys!!:D Yes. Open a question:D

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

@Sheraz12345  Open up a question and post it! I want to read it:D

sheraz12345 · Answer

Okay u just wait :P

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

Hurry!:D Fine then. Lol:D

ikram002p · Answer

http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/53ba1814e4b02cb280b8a84d

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

$\Large\cal\rlap{\color{magenta}{Amazing!!!}}{\color{black}{\; Amazing!!!}}$ @YanaSidlinskiy

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

Yep!:D Thanx @Whitemonsterbunny17

anonymous · Answer

like bit...nice....

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

Thanx:D

anonymous · Answer

sorry...i mean....like it....nice...

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

It's fine. I don't take it as an offense.

geekfromthefutur · Answer

Amazing job @YanaSidlinskiy  :D i love your poem

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

:D!! It was a "First timer". Thanx:D

anonymous · Answer

AWESSOME!!!!!!!!!!

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

Thanx @RussianBorn

paki · Answer

waooo sis... that's great.... nice one.... @YanaSidlinskiy

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

Hahhaha:D Thanx BRuh!:D @paki

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

@Abhisar  seen this?

abhisar · Answer

It's very nice @yanasidlinskiy

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

Hahhaha!! Thanx!!:)

quickstudent · Answer

Wow, this is your first poem? It's great! So meaningful! It really makes the reader look inside...

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

Hahhaha!! Ya, this is my first one and thanx, quickstudent!!:)

camerondoherty · Answer

Amazing!

camerondoherty · Answer

love it every single bit of it lol

anonymous_user · Answer

Astounding c:

kaylee_td · Answer

Fantastic!

anonymous · Answer

It's interesting! @YanaSidlinskiy

yanasidlinskiy · Answer

Hahhaha!! Thanx guys!!:)

anonymous · Answer

its AMAZING..........

anonymous · Answer

I love it.