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OpenStudy (dan815):

My walls shall be rebuilt, from the ashes and the rubble loftier, thicker, out of rock so far from brittle. Dogs have licked my sores, vultures had encircled me, a raven's gale around my scene. My tormentor lies in wait, for death creeps soon at my threads of time Only Contemplation, the company of a man thrown in a bottomless ditch Far is the reach that grips my head, they are but the clutches of a witch. But a dead man tells no tales, I am alive and I am the prince of wales

OpenStudy (conqueror):

?

OpenStudy (dan815):

what do u think :))

OpenStudy (ipwnbunnies):

OpenStudy (sheraz12345):

<3

OpenStudy (dan815):

lmao ♥

OpenStudy (nincompoop):

alright alright fineeeee

OpenStudy (nincompoop):

the first passage was good I give you that

OpenStudy (dan815):

hahaha

OpenStudy (dan815):

cool

OpenStudy (dan815):

now i need to smething about that feet of the ground lol, since he was in a bottomless ditch

OpenStudy (dan815):

i will rework the 2nd half

OpenStudy (nincompoop):

keep refining :D

OpenStudy (dan815):

:))

OpenStudy (dan815):

@camerondoherty look cam :) i am working on it

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

U made that?! <3

OpenStudy (dan815):

@Taylor<3sRin

OpenStudy (dan815):

yess :)

OpenStudy (dan815):

i saw that!

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

Its aweosme! i luv it

OpenStudy (dan815):

@OOOPS @ikram002p

OpenStudy (dan815):

come here u big baby! @OOOPS

OpenStudy (taylor<3srin):

I really like it.

OpenStudy (dan815):

OpenStudy (dan815):

ill write about a bear next time

OpenStudy (loser66):

hey, what's wrong with you?? why poem?? get back my friend. I don't see any tomb marked "Die because of lovesick"

OpenStudy (dan815):

LOOL

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

xD

OpenStudy (dan815):

i am not lovesick!

OpenStudy (loser66):

liar!!

OpenStudy (squirrels):

OpenStudy (dan815):

hahha ♥ for u bby

OpenStudy (dan815):

lol its funny a yanee is gone, but ur pic is still around

OpenStudy (dan815):

feels like she is still around=]

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

Thats yanne?

OpenStudy (dan815):

ya in squ pic

OpenStudy (squirrels):

<< ♥

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

lol

OpenStudy (anonymous):

mhmmmm

OpenStudy (anonymous):

It's really good! Is it a poem?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Nahhhh it's not a poem

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Interesting.

OpenStudy (dan815):

its a poemm maybe i dunno too haha

OpenStudy (dan815):

a little poem a little free verse?

OpenStudy (ipwnbunnies):

Sure, free verse, let's go with that .cx

OpenStudy (dan815):

hahahaha

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yeah, it seems like a free verse to me.

OpenStudy (dan815):

@tanya123

OpenStudy (tanya123):

Lmao "Prince of wales"

OpenStudy (tanya123):

OMG I couldn't even read it!!!

OpenStudy (dan815):

lool

OpenStudy (tanya123):

Anyways, Nice poem - especially the last line!!!

OpenStudy (dan815):

♥♥

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