hey need help
when the leaves fall down and the flowers bloom there's nothing in it nicer then the color blue. its nice good dreams and good air out please. it makes me happy every night every moment every fright
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thanks
Yes. After quick evaluation, the writing itself sounds good. However, please correct some grammar.
that is what you think
its a poem
It's cute, and a hint of genius. However, I think you could really edit your work and maybe switch around your wording a little.
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thanks for the advice
Medal?
sure
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