Question

What do think of my original song? :-) I'm Erkan btw :-D www.soundcloud.com/erkthejerk2/into-the-dark-feat-arieya-single

Answer 1

Welcome to OpenStudy...

I ... this...
I should let @TheAngleCaroll have the first say before I chew this song apart >.>
#notcompletelyheartless

Answer 2

Oh... wow. Just wow @sleepyhead314 WOW

Answer 3

ummm sweetheart, you need to work on your singing skills. It's good lyrics but your singing kinda ruined it. I'm sorry DON'T GIVE UP if you love singing then continue but PRACTICE a lot

Answer 4

well I must say, this song was quite original ;D
You could use a little work on your transitions since your voice and the girl's voice contrast so much in tone. I think also defining clearly what notes you plan on singing would help to :)
Good Job @erkanc_lovatic

Answer 5

I might just run into the dark after hearing this. I seriously don't want to be rude, but the vocals need some major work. It wasn't the worst, but I couldn't pay attention to the lyrics over the bloody vocals. Once again, my apologies, but please work on vocal talent more.

Answer 6

My turn...
I might rarely listen to modern music, but I am pretty sure this can't even be considered as a song. As for the degree of suck, I'd say the girl's voice sucked less.
but really, EVERY OTHER NOTE WAS OUT OF TUNE
*cries* my poor ears
I assume the back ground was of your own making
which didn't fit the song at all, but was alright... except for those weird fumbles that some out of no where that ruined what little there was good about this "song"
dude, if you want to sing, listen to people sing
with how blatantly you slaughtered the notes I was so very very close to calling you tone deaf, seriously, tone deaf
the chord progressions were not fitting in any way, maybe you should invest in a music theory class too
I'm not sure you understand the difference between note changes and glisses but added too many glisses makes it seem like you don't know what note you're supposed to land on... which you probably don't...
I don't care if you meant the notes to be that way, but some notes are just Wrong. they don't fit the chords and don't give the phrase the meaning that is supposed to go there
(stops commenting at 0:40)
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hopefully you don't come back to see this @erkanc_lovatic

Answer 7

lol @sleppyhead314 well i only recorded my vocals once, and without even listening to the track because i didnt have time, and yes i made the background music, and btw i just started singing less then a year ago so yea

Answer 8

@TheSaint905621 yea i know i didnt really have enough time to re record my vocals, so i just used what i alrady had, and i just started singing less than a year ago, so yea im practicing :-) lol

Answer 9

Hopefully if you DO keep practicing, you will get better

Answer 10

@TheAngleCaroll thank you, i stared singing less then a year ago so yea im still practicing and trying really hard to master and really find my voice

Answer 11

you redid it?
http://goo.gl/xgPKIi