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Can some one to help me write a thesis please?

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@tester97

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it is about the book Hiroshima

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What? A written book should have one

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what do you mean

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EVERY article of writing that is about fact has a thesis statement

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ok and

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????

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im lost asf

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*Face desk*

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yep

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can you help me write a thesis about the book Hiroshima about the human rights issue genocide

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@wolf1728 @tester97 @jim_thompson5910 @satellite73

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Tip: In order to write a successful thesis statement:
Avoid burying a great thesis statement in the middle of a paragraph or late in the paper.
Be as clear and as specific as possible; avoid vague words.
Indicate the point of your paper but avoid sentence structures like, “The point of my paper is…”

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hope that helped

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ok can you help me a little more

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Thesis length

Write for brevity rather than length. The goal is the shortest possible paper that contains all information necessary to describe the work and support the interpretation.
Avoid unnecessary repetition and irrelevant tangents.
Necessary repetition: the main theme should be developed in the introduction as a motivation or working hypothesis. It is then developed in the main body of the paper, and mentioned again in the discussion section (and, of course, in the abstract and conclusions).
Some suggestions on how to shorten your paper:
Use tables for repetitive information.
Include only sufficient background material to permit the reader to understand your story, not every paper ever written on the subject.
Use figure captions effectively.
Don't describe the contents of the figures and/or tables in the text item-by-item. Instead, use the text to point out the most significant patterns, items or trends in the figures and tables.
Delete "observations" or "results" that are mentioned in the text for which you have not shown data.
Delete "conclusions" that are not directly supported by your observations or results.
Delete "interpretation" or "discussion" sections that are inconclusive.
Delete "interpretation" or "discussion" sections that are only peripherally related to your new results or observations.
Scrutinize adjectives! adverbs and prepositional phrases.

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so if i post a thesis could you review it lol

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sure

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ok can you help me a little in writing it

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ya

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ok so how should i start it

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when what r u writing about

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i am writing about a genocide about the bombing in Hiroshima about that and stuff

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okay start with what you will be talk about

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ok well it is about the people in Hiroshima were killed for no reason and they were working and they were randomly killed

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now go in to a little detailed paragraph about it

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ok 1 sec

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im writing ok wait a bit

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ya

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little not to long just to give the reader an idea what you r going to talk about

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im almost done

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okay

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The genocide issue in japan that was started by America because of the actions of Pearl Harbor that were uncalled for but also the atomic bombing was not necessary because the innocent civilians were not a danger to the USA. The USA over exaggerated and killed millions of people in Japan including the civilians and the kids and women that were living there and things like that because people are not ment to live in fear of death. Those people were killed for no reason and that is why they were called genocide not killed for a reason and if you are killed for no reason then you are genocided like in the time of Hitler and Hitler was terrible.

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great job now you just have to revise for mistakes

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what kind of mistakes

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grammar

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other than that

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it is fine

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The genocide issue in japan that was started by America because of the actions of Pearl Harbor that were uncalled for but also the atomic bombing was not necessary because the innocent civilians were not a danger to the USA. The USA over exaggerated and killed millions of people in Japan including the civilians and the kids and women that were living there and things like that because people are not meant to live in fear of death. Those people were killed for no reason and that is why they were called genocide not killed for a reason and if you are killed for no reason then you are genocide like in the time of Hitler and Hitler was terrible. is that better