Question

my first poem ever what do you guys think of it...

i look in the mirror
i see myself
i see my smile- fake-
i see my body- fat-
i see my guilt, my fear and shame
no beauty can come from these horrible traits

so i stand and
i look in the mirror
i listen to the voices
i hear you
i hear you say stupid and hoe
i hear you say slut
you call me a bi*** then say im not worth s***
no beauty can come from these horrible traits

i listen to the voices
i feel the chill run down my back
i feel pain
i feel stupid, dumb- "i suck"
i cant deal with problems
i cant handle reality-

Answer 1

that was beautiful :)

Answer 2

i need a break
no beauty can come from these horrible traits

so i sit and
i feel the chill run down my back
i think about life
i tell myself no
i tell myself i cant
that i shouldnt and wont
im not good enough
i only think -shame- im such a disgrace
no beauty can come from these horrible traits

Answer 3

that was the rest of it and thank you so much