Question

how are these lyrics i wrote- im kinda not feeling some of them :-/

Answer 1

In the light I can see your love
In the dark I can feel your heart
Now in the high tide
Th-the high tide
I don't know where you are

All I want is to see your smile,
All I need is to hear you laugh,
With me,
And then you might kiss me,
Oh oh oh oh,
Kiss me,
And then you leave without a goodbye,
It's not my fault you turned out to be the way you are,
But don't take your feels out on me,
You need me I don't need you girl,
Or maybe I do
Oh oh oh oh,

In the sunlight I am blinded by your beauty
In the darkness I can feel your mind
But in the twilight
Th-the twilight
I can't find what your wanting

All I want is to see your smile,
All I need is to hear you laugh,
With me,
And then you might kiss me,
Oh oh oh oh,
Kiss me,
And then you leave without a goodbye,
It's not my fault you turned out to be the way you are,
But don't take your feels out on me,
You need me I don't need you girl,
Or maybe I do
Oh oh oh oh,

I'm searching for a sweet serenity
Oh I just need you next to me
There's no one else (else, else)
That can save me from hell-e-e-el

All I want is to see your smile,
All I need is to hear you laugh,
With me,
And then you might kiss me,
Oh oh oh oh,
Kiss me,
And then you leave without a goodbye,
It's no my fault you turned out to be the way you are,
But don't take your feels out on me,
You need me I don't need you girl,
Or maybe I do
Oh oh oh oh,
Kiss me
Save me
Kiss me
Oh oh oh oh,