Question

lots of u said my original song "Into The Dark" was bad but can u please check out my cover of "Warrior" by Demi Lovato thank u and tell me what u think :-) https://soundcloud.com/erkthejerk2/warrior-single

Answer 1

I'm glad to see that you hadn't lost confidence in yourself ;P
The rhythm was correct, that's the only thing that's right about your cover
although this one isn't as bad as the one before, it's still pretty gosh darn bad.

Tone deaf: "Being tone deaf is having difficulty or being unable to correctly hear relative differences between notes; however, in common usage, it refers to a person's inability to reproduce them accurately."
by this definition I can officially call you tone deaf ^_^
well... it sounded like you were singing with the headphones in
which would explain why the rhythm was right and the key was right(ish)
having sang it with headphones in would also explain why it was so horribly out of tune, some notes were really a half step off >,<

I don't know... but something about your voice just annoys the hell out of me.
the naselness, the thinness of the tone, the yodeling. it's not lush and warm as the song needs it to be.

Answer 2

0:17 out of tune
0:19 "that I" the "I" note is really out of tune
0:25 "get" you couldn't find the right note right away which makes it sound incorrect
0:27 sounds like you over shot the note = out of tune
0:36 waver in pitch = out of tune
0:46 yodeling, either your voice cracked or you didn't hit the right note right away
0:50 "I" is cut too short
0:56 this is where you sing like a deaf person
1:00 that was actually decent
1:08 out of tune
1:13 "been" out of tune
1:18 weird twang in voice
1:20 no... just no
1:25 didn't hit note right on = out of tune
1:30 extremely out of tune
1:33 out of tune
1:35 over shot = out of tune
1:36 it's just all the same mistakes
1:49 out of tuneness
2:00 lack of depth in tone
2:07 if you like music
2:11 play a guitar or something
2:18 but seriously, singing's not your thing
2:35 the heck was that?
2:43 *covers ears* whinny voice, that ain't singing at all dude
2:47 not right notes
2:50 every note Out.Of.Tune.
3:01 u did a ugly glissando instead of a smooth note change
3:04 out of tune
3:06 your attempt at a softer tone is making my skin crawl
3:09 holy cows no
3:11 I don't think that was singing
3:16 I can't believe I'm still listening to this :X
3:22 out of tune

^ that's all the mistakes I found...
it's not all of them, mind you
my brother is a better (more detailed) critic
but he force shut down my computer after listening to not even five seconds of your voice
I need to clean my ears out now, toodles

Answer 3

@TheAngleCaroll your turn ;)

Answer 4

LOL.
Well, some very few parts were good, try a song in your range, like a guy song. You might sound better, you did crack a lot and I think it's because it's Demi and she sings kinda low and high. You need to work on your singing skills, I would stop recording and just practice. I never started recording myself until just a few weeks ago, and I've been singing all my life ever since I could talk. You just need to practice and take a break from singing. Maybe try looking up vocal practices on YouTube and such, that's what I did because I can't afford lessons. Just try a song sung by a guy, you kinda have a Lifehouse voice and The Red Jumpsuit Asparagus voice. Try one of their songs.

Answer 5

Glad to know you have confidence. Love it! Just try a song in your range, I'm sure you can nail that because there are parts in the song where it's good. :) Keep up with your confidence! :)

Answer 6

@jendearest16 thank u that just put a smile on my face :-)

Answer 7

@sleepyhead314 if u hate my singing so much than y did u listen to it so much that u even made a list of like EVERY single second - if u hate it SOOO much then dont listen to it XP *cough couch JELLY OR NAWWW cough cough*

Answer 8

@TheAngleCaroll thanks but i like recording all the time so i can see the growth process like from last year (when i started singing) and now there is a BIGG difference- but thanks fro the advice :-)

Answer 9

;)
you may suck and make my ears bleed, but I enjoy giving critiques on music
(if you can even call that music)
you like to sing, but it's not very good
so I give comments and hope someday you'll improve
I'm not a bad person (I think), I don't curse people off, or give nasty comments without reason. If I think someone is bad, I tell them why.
that's why I listened to every second of your song.

Answer 10

@erkanc_lovatic Then record yourself but don't post it. and PICK A SONG IN YOUR RANGE!

Answer 11

I can help and were you sick when you did this