Question

what would be a great ending to type on how volunteering can make a difference and how it should be required to graduate?

Answer 1

@Hero

Answer 2

It just needs to be short. should I put "so, volunteer make a difference..

Answer 3

this is my essay... so can you help @hero?

Answer 4

@jgirl128

Answer 5

I saw you got an answer and I'm sorry I didn't respond quicker, I wasn't home :/ anyways, as for your conclusion:

first of all, a conclusion should highlight the importance of your thesis, give the essay closure, and leave an impression on the person reading it

second of all, make sure you have these in your conclusion:

-include a small summary of the main points of your essay (small as in one sentence)
-reminds your readers what your three examples were (aka your three reasons on why volunteer work should be required to graduate)
-provide a course of action

^ what i mean by course of action is basically solving an issue. help the reader apply what you're saying to their life. for example, since you're talking about volunteering, you might end your conclusion by saying "go sign up as a volunteer for a place that interests you and see how it improves your life"

obviously don't use my example word for word because it's not exactly the best example

Answer 6

anyways, I hope that helped :)