Question

Introduction?

Answer 1

can someone help make what I wrote into an introduction?

Answer 2

@IFlyInThe~Skiez0063 @cram

Answer 3

hi

Answer 4

hi:)

Answer 5

will message you hold on one min

Answer 6

k. can you help though too?

Answer 7

Very good and very well written, no complaints here. Good job.

Answer 8

thanks! I hoped it sounded good! but I need to but it into an introduction

Answer 9

@IFlyInThe~Skiez0063

Answer 10

put

Answer 11

fine.... i'll tag you in the english section okay? moderators...

Answer 12

Okay all you need to do is first organize the main key points you want to put into the intro like this perhaps?
~For most people, volunteering is an extra; something that's nice to do, but I think It should be absolutely necessary to graduate high school. Volunteering service has been associated with academic growth, also it makes students more attractive to potential employers. ~
kinda like this. So that way you can expand on your reasons...But I think there's a couple run-on sentences that you might want to fix, but basically that's what a good solid intro is.