Question

is anyone good at English?

Answer 1

What do you need help with?

Answer 2

well i had to write an essay and i started it but my sister wrote the rest because i had to do something and now shes out of town and i have two questions that i have to answer and i have no clue how to answer them

Answer 3

Just post them up and I'll try.

Answer 4

Attach the essay to the comments:)

Answer 5

If you scroll down to the very bottom the two questions are down there

Answer 6

Okay:)

Answer 7

But im also not to sure about the story either :/

Answer 8

For question number #1, They want you to highlight were you either made the story fast or slow...
2. They wanted your character to talk so you can get to know the character

The story is great though! I love it!

Answer 9

i would say its sorta slow wouldn't you? because it doesn't show that its fast

Answer 10

And thank you!(:

Answer 11

wELCOME:)

Answer 12

Just give me a minute to edit this :) It's interesting, but there are a few grammatical mistakes.

Answer 13

Here ya go

Answer 14

Omg thank you so much! that actually helped alot

Answer 15

No prob :)

Answer 16

Wait for the question where it says...go back and highlight the places where you incorporated pacing techniques. what color did you use for that?

Answer 17

The ones I put in blue should help for some of those, though you'll need to ask your sister what she did for pacing. I would think something like using short, simple sentences, in a sequence, as well as detailed imagery, allowed for the feeling of suspense to heighten.

Here's the types though:
Red - correction
Green - Words you could use
Blue - suggestions on pacing and wording

Answer 18

thank you so much! and i will