The question was to large to copy and paste, so I took a screenshot. Which one is it? http://imgur.com/LhBtX2S
I'd like to think B, because of the semi-colon
Without the semi-colon, it seems like as if it's a run-on sentence...
Next one: Salvador Dalí, born Salvador Felipe Jacinto Dalí y Domenech. In Figueras, Spain in 1904. He was a Surrealist painter and printmaker; some of his most notable works explore subconscious imagery. In fact, he was profoundly influenced by the writings of Sigmund Freud. An Austrian neurologist who created psychoanalysis. Which is the best way to improve this paragraph’s sentence fluency? Correct the run-on sentences. Correct the fused sentences. Correct the comma splices. Correct the sentence fragments.
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