[1] Cory tried out for his school play, Rumors, by Neil Simon. [2] Cory got the part of “Ken.” [3] Cory attended rehearsal every day after school, and he practiced his lines every night. [4] Cory was fantastic on opening night. [5] Cory made the audience laugh!

Why does this paragraph lack sentence variety?
Each sentence begins with the subject.
Each sentence begins with a dependent clause.
Each sentence begins with a prepositional phrase.
Each sentence begins with the predicate.

Question

[1] Cory tried out for his school play, Rumors, by Neil Simon. [2] Cory got the part of “Ken.” [3] Cory attended rehearsal every day after school, and he practiced his lines every night. [4] Cory was fantastic on opening night. [5] Cory made the audience laugh!

Why does this paragraph lack sentence variety?
Each sentence begins with the subject.
Each sentence begins with a dependent clause.
Each sentence begins with a prepositional phrase.
Each sentence begins with the predicate.

anonymous · Answer

@Gabebro13

anonymous · Answer

A Each sentence begins with the subject. Eg. Cory blah blah Cory blah blah Cory