ANY LIFESAVERS?!?!!?
HELP
what is the question I will see if I know it
this. (Document attached)
what was your previous argument
this
@kdanielle
ok so basically from what I have seen in your paper just re-state your topic. but begin with in conclusion-... what I think your teacher wants is for you to tell why it is important to volunteer and along with that tell what affect that it has on the future wether it be positive or negative
write in 3rd person and just reinstate your argument
i dunno how to do that. that why I need your help
@kdanielle
would you like me to see if I can start you off?
@Monster1234
yes! actually can you do the whole thing??!??!
because I absolutely suck at writing
unfortunately I do not have the time to write your essay I am at summer school. but I will see if I can get you started on it and give you somewhat of a direction to take.
this is my essay to do it
@IFlyInThe~Skiez0063
in conclusion, volunteering is very beneficial to students and their future's. It can greatly impact the students chance of getting a job. Any student that participates in volunteer work will become more confident in getting where they need to be in the future and will give them a better idea of what it will be like in the real world.
I think that's what you need?
the teacher wanted you to wrap up your essay right?
yes
do you think that will work for you?
it says discuss future research and stuff (here...attached document)
say that future research suggests that students who volunteer while in high school become more successful and have a better shot at completing their goals.
It also says restate your claim in a new way and summarize your argument
hmmm...restate your first paragraph in a different way
i dunno how to do it! that's why i want your help!:)
although volunteering is an extra activity outside of school, I feel as if it should be necessary in order to graduate high school.
okay.....pat yourself on the back and go get a kdanielle snack... because you deserve it! @kdanielle
thanks I hope it helps!
it does:)
good! (: back to work for me
yay? jk goodluck!
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