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OpenStudy (dan815):

read it!! 4th comp Please excuse the spelling and grammar errors.

OpenStudy (dan815):

Hello My friends, I write with no emotion I write with a cold notion I write for my broken passion my question : where have you gone Where have they all gone I've looked all around, They are no where to be found Where is my answer? What you speak I cannot concur Your language, as foreign to me as my heart beat as mysterious as the lake on a moonless night But yet as vivid as the prime bloom of spring And as painful as the blood that runs down the neck of a lamb you have heard my cry, my angst your replies give my soul no rest These questions require an answer I have called you my friend, your voice gives me comfort, your provision, through thick and thin, it is the breath under my nostrils. you sheltered me from the harsh glare of the sun Yet I am still left burdened because my friends none other, the ever familiar, the air and the trees. It is time to depart, Good bye my friends

Elsa213 (elsa213):

:O NOOO!!!

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

Sounds like something from Shakespeare

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

gj tho

OpenStudy (dan815):

bahahaa

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

r u serious tho?

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

ur leaving?

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

again

OpenStudy (dan815):

NO iam not cam, its just a poem

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

*sigh* Thank Goodness

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

oooo

OpenStudy (dan815):

lol butman! u butt

Elsa213 (elsa213):

:O OMG! I ALREADY TOLD EVERY1 THAT U BE LEAVING >:(

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

XD

OpenStudy (dan815):

im gonna beat u elsa!

Elsa213 (elsa213):

>_> b b but u pmed me saying that u be leaving >_>

OpenStudy (dan815):

yes i know that was before okay -.- .. that was for later

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

tht was for later?! WUT?!

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

=.=

Elsa213 (elsa213):

http://prntscr.com/45cgf7

OpenStudy (dan815):

lol ELSa ughh

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

dan! How could u!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Totally awesome... I love it :)

Elsa213 (elsa213):

Dan b lying >_>

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

he betta be

OpenStudy (anonymous):

He has written it, I bet

Elsa213 (elsa213):

@dan815 u r my buddy :D

Elsa213 (elsa213):

*cough*can u give me a medal*cough*

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

-_-

OpenStudy (anonymous):

lol elsa

OpenStudy (dan815):

sigh.. as u wish!

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

XD

Elsa213 (elsa213):

YAY!!!!! Tank u

OpenStudy (awesome781):

I love it!! Its love ❤_❤

OpenStudy (dan815):

:) SARAA ♥_♥

Elsa213 (elsa213):

d d d dan..... U have a spider on ur head O_O

OpenStudy (dan815):

:'O

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Who wouldn't love it? It's great

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

True

OpenStudy (awesome781):

Dan you are an awesome poem writer :)

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

^

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I agree with awesome

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

*Sara

OpenStudy (dan815):

omg sara i cannot take these kinda compliments lol

OpenStudy (awesome781):

Ok I really hate your poem ! It Is just too good!!!

OpenStudy (dan815):

haha <333

OpenStudy (dan815):

New version!! Hello My friends, I write with no emotion I write with a cold notion I write for my broken passion my question : where have you gone Where have they all gone I've looked all around, They are no where to be found Where is my answer? What you speak I cannot concur Your language, as foreign to me as my heart beat As mysterious as the lake on a moonless night But yet as vivid as the prime bloom of spring And as painful as the blood that runs down the neck of a lamb you have heard my cry, my angst, your replies give my soul no rest These questions require an answer I have called you my friend, your voice gives me comfort, your provision, through thick and thin, it is the breath under my nostrils. you sheltered me from the harsh glare of the sun Yet I am still left burdened, you've hidden my enemies under your skin Your paths I tread with care, Traps lay everywhere! Though you cover me from the drench of cold rain, I am caged, You've hidden the skies, bringing me pain My friends are none other, the ever familiar, the forest and the wind It is time for me to depart, Good bye my friends.

OpenStudy (dan815):

@somy

OpenStudy (dan815):

I have 2 versions!! the one at the top and this one i just pasted

OpenStudy (somy):

\(\huge\cal\color{pink}{(◍❤ᴗ❤◍)❤}\)

OpenStudy (dan815):

hahahaha

OpenStudy (somy):

yesh i like it (◍❤ᴗ❤◍)❤ where am i? lmao

OpenStudy (dan815):

HAHAHAHa

OpenStudy (somy):

i torture u a lot tho :3

OpenStudy (dan815):

u do the exact opposite actually :P

OpenStudy (somy):

then where is my exact opposite poem? (◍❤ᴗ❤◍)❤

OpenStudy (dan815):

haha stoppp playing with me!

OpenStudy (somy):

awww but its fun (◍❤ᴗ❤◍)❤

OpenStudy (somy):

\(\huge\cal\color{pink}{( ˘ ³˘)❤ }\)

OpenStudy (somy):

here is a hug also \(\huge\cal\color{pink}{(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ}\) come dan come im exact opposite of this poem as u said so i'll give u a warm hug :3

OpenStudy (anonymous):

This one is even better! I like it! :) Where are your other poems?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

:O oooo aaaaa

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