read it!! 4th comp Please excuse the spelling and grammar errors.
Hello My friends, I write with no emotion I write with a cold notion I write for my broken passion my question : where have you gone Where have they all gone I've looked all around, They are no where to be found Where is my answer? What you speak I cannot concur Your language, as foreign to me as my heart beat as mysterious as the lake on a moonless night But yet as vivid as the prime bloom of spring And as painful as the blood that runs down the neck of a lamb you have heard my cry, my angst your replies give my soul no rest These questions require an answer I have called you my friend, your voice gives me comfort, your provision, through thick and thin, it is the breath under my nostrils. you sheltered me from the harsh glare of the sun Yet I am still left burdened because my friends none other, the ever familiar, the air and the trees. It is time to depart, Good bye my friends
:O NOOO!!!
Sounds like something from Shakespeare
gj tho
bahahaa
r u serious tho?
ur leaving?
again
NO iam not cam, its just a poem
*sigh* Thank Goodness
oooo
lol butman! u butt
:O OMG! I ALREADY TOLD EVERY1 THAT U BE LEAVING >:(
XD
im gonna beat u elsa!
>_> b b but u pmed me saying that u be leaving >_>
yes i know that was before okay -.- .. that was for later
tht was for later?! WUT?!
=.=
lol ELSa ughh
dan! How could u!
Totally awesome... I love it :)
Dan b lying >_>
he betta be
He has written it, I bet
@dan815 u r my buddy :D
*cough*can u give me a medal*cough*
-_-
lol elsa
sigh.. as u wish!
XD
YAY!!!!! Tank u
I love it!! Its love ❤_❤
:) SARAA ♥_♥
d d d dan..... U have a spider on ur head O_O
:'O
Who wouldn't love it? It's great
True
Dan you are an awesome poem writer :)
^
I agree with awesome
*Sara
omg sara i cannot take these kinda compliments lol
Ok I really hate your poem ! It Is just too good!!!
haha <333
New version!! Hello My friends, I write with no emotion I write with a cold notion I write for my broken passion my question : where have you gone Where have they all gone I've looked all around, They are no where to be found Where is my answer? What you speak I cannot concur Your language, as foreign to me as my heart beat As mysterious as the lake on a moonless night But yet as vivid as the prime bloom of spring And as painful as the blood that runs down the neck of a lamb you have heard my cry, my angst, your replies give my soul no rest These questions require an answer I have called you my friend, your voice gives me comfort, your provision, through thick and thin, it is the breath under my nostrils. you sheltered me from the harsh glare of the sun Yet I am still left burdened, you've hidden my enemies under your skin Your paths I tread with care, Traps lay everywhere! Though you cover me from the drench of cold rain, I am caged, You've hidden the skies, bringing me pain My friends are none other, the ever familiar, the forest and the wind It is time for me to depart, Good bye my friends.
@somy
I have 2 versions!! the one at the top and this one i just pasted
\(\huge\cal\color{pink}{(◍❤ᴗ❤◍)❤}\)
hahahaha
yesh i like it (◍❤ᴗ❤◍)❤ where am i? lmao
HAHAHAHa
i torture u a lot tho :3
u do the exact opposite actually :P
then where is my exact opposite poem? (◍❤ᴗ❤◍)❤
haha stoppp playing with me!
awww but its fun (◍❤ᴗ❤◍)❤
\(\huge\cal\color{pink}{( ˘ ³˘)❤ }\)
here is a hug also \(\huge\cal\color{pink}{(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ}\) come dan come im exact opposite of this poem as u said so i'll give u a warm hug :3
This one is even better! I like it! :) Where are your other poems?
:O oooo aaaaa
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