Question

CAN ANYOUNE HELP ME TO CHECK THIS PASSAGE???????????????

Answer 1

ANYONE?????????

Answer 2

sure, one sec. :)

Answer 3

TQ.. :)

Answer 4

Alright, there were a few grammar mistakes that I've corrected, but overall I proofread it and from reading that paragraph, what I can say is: it's a well written piece and a good topic to write about.
Good job! :)

Answer 5

tq:)

Answer 6

yw

Answer 7

Are you an American????

Answer 8

nope, I'm from the UK.

Answer 9

No wonder your English is better.........

Answer 10

no your English is good too, where are you from?

Answer 11

Mh 17, well,it is Malaysia

Answer 12

oh, I see.

Answer 13

well,is it night or morning at you place????