Question

Can someone please help me do this?

Answer 1

http://www.nytimes.com/roomfordebate/2014/07/07/should-you-send-your-children-to-summer-camp

Answer 2

what exactly is it that you need help with? :)

Answer 3

are you doing flvs? because i did assignment when i was there.

Answer 4

im doing flvs, iv done none stop work all day today i actually did 38 assignments because everything has to be turned in by sunday :p but should i do this or the Kennedy-Nixon Debate which do you think is easier?

Answer 5

well actually it has to be turned in Saturday (tomorrow at 10pm)

Answer 6

wow nice job!! :) i understand too ive been doing none stop work for flvs. but i finished that class cuz i took it a while ago. i would reccomend just doing this one because it looks alot easier and there wouldnt be as much to go into detail about rather than with the kennedy-Nixon one. get rest after! here if you need any help :)

Answer 7

Thank you(: and could you actually help me? i have 11 assignments left and 2 are exams and another two are DBA's and another two are Collaboration's and i have them under control so i have 5 assignments i need help on could you help me?

Answer 8

sure no problem! :) since i already took the class i know the slopes. just send me whatevr it is that you need help with!!

Answer 9

This is all what i need help on
05.03A Analyzing an Argument
05.09 Writing Your Argument
05.11 Present Your Argument
06.07 Opening Paragraph
06.09 Evidence and Conclusion
do you remember any of those?

Answer 10

yeah i remember those! the last dba's are really easy

Answer 11

im really good at the dba's i always get 100's on them i have to do both of them at 11:30 tomorrow

Answer 12

thats good!!! same here :)
just make sure you review and have your notes out during just in case. for the first problem that you showed me all your doing is putting in information and if you want i could help you with that. im not sleeping tonight i have to take a segment one exam for algebra so im here all night if u need me :)
and tomrrow too!

Answer 13

yeah, and ohh wow thats always fun!
i think im gonna do that one last but im having trouble with one...

Answer 14

which one? ill help :)

Answer 15

Since i failed english i got everything taken from me and my parents are out of town at work so idk what to do

Answer 16

for this assignment all you do is type up your argument and then i would reccomend instead of making a video just reading it to a parent or sibling and just have them fillout the audience rubric. or in all honesty you could just fill it out yourself. then after you do that you submit your audience rubric along with your typed up argument.

Answer 17

aww, i completely understand! it was the same for me expect it was algebra. well dont worry your not alone im here to help :)

Answer 18

omg you get me lol

Answer 19

so i type up any argument or do i have a certain one? and omg lol twinsies

Answer 20

you have a certain argument i forget which one it is hold on one sec let me read it again

Answer 21

it says that you have to submit a multimedia aid for this assignment but i never did and i didnt get any points taken away. i had a cool teacher tho Mrs. Ingle. anyways this is the module where it tells you to choose between the sports thingy debate and the books being banned debate right?

Answer 22

Hold on i have to look

Answer 23

alright :) ill be here

Answer 24

I honestly dont know it doesn't tell me

Answer 25

What does this mean??
Congratulations! Your preparations for your presentation to the special committee are off to a great start. You’ve taken your outline to the next level by using it to draft an engaging argument. Submit your draft with parenthetical citations and keying.

Answer 26

sorry i just noticed you replied back. well when i did this module it was for the sports thingy debate (on whether college players should get paid for playing or not) or the books being banned debate. You had to choose between the two and write and argument about it to present to a "commitee". That means that you have to redo your submission but with citations this time. Do you know how to do that?

Answer 27

Not really

Answer 28

alright um which assignment is this for?
I vaguely remember doing this one. Let me see if i can help. Your in module 6 right?

Answer 29

umm this >>>>>> Congratulations! Your preparations for your presentation to the special committee are off to a great start. You’ve taken your outline to the next level by using it to draft an engaging argument. Submit your draft with parenthetical citations and keying.
(thats 05.09)

Answer 30

ok give me one sec!

Answer 31

Alrighty

Answer 32

yay i just finished 06.07 so 4 more assignments

Answer 33

thats awesome! :)
ok so i forgot what parenthetical citations were and i looked it up, this is the link http://content.easybib.com/citation-guides/mla-format/how-to-cite-a-parenthetical-citations-mla/#.U9MuirHG-D4

Answer 34

i hope that helped! i just dont remember completely what the work was for module 5. was it the ones with the two poems? if i can just remmeber that i can help you lots

Answer 35

module 5?

Answer 36

are you still stuck on it?

Answer 37

yes but im also working on something else or well trying to work i keep getting stuck on everything, i think it's because im so tired

Answer 38

i like praise you because you did so many assignments in a row lol. why dont you take a nap and then come back to it?
and also for module 5 what were the main assiggnments for it? that way i could remember and help you do the one your stuck on.

Answer 39

the thing is i can get on my email since im grounded so i cant confirm it to keep this account so idk if it will still be here when i get up :/

Answer 40

well depending on how long you have had the account it should still be there. if you only had it for like a day i think it should still be up

Answer 41

true, and is this what your talking about?
05.01 What is an Argument Quiz
05.02 Developing a Strong Argument Quiz
05.03A Analyzing an Argument
05.03B Analyzing an Argument
05.04 Gathering Evidence Quiz
05.05 Citing Your Sources Quiz
05.06 Increasing Awareness
05.07 Stating Your Claim
05.09 Writing Your Argument
05.10 A Powerful Product
05.11 Present Your Argument
05.12 Discussion-Based Assessment
05.13 The Right Word Quiz

Answer 42

yes that! now in those lessons for the argument you have to write which two options does it give you? because you supposed to choose.

Answer 43

umm i got
http://learn.flvs.net/webdav/educator_e1cr_v14/unit05/journey/05_10b_02a.htm

http://breeze.flvs.net:9090/p95644901/

Assessment Instructions

You are almost ready to present your argument to the special committee. The only thing left to do is revise and edit your argument. Use the revision and editing checklists from this lesson as you proofread your argument. As you work, keep track of the changes you make. Afterward, write a one-paragraph reflection on your revision process.

Some reflection questions to consider:

What steps did you follow to revise and edit your argument?
Who did you consult for help in the process?
What type of errors did you correct more than others? Spelling? Punctuation? Sentence Structure?
What makes your final argument better than your first draft?

Answer 44

Ohh and

Answer 45

wait i think that was all wrong

Answer 46

yes this im almost positive of its the module where you choose between the sports debate or the certain books being banned debate. i did the certain books being banned debate. go back to the begining of your module to read which options it gives you. then once you choose ill help you from there. this assignment wasent that bad.

Answer 47

Previously, you created an outline to shape your argument according to one of three organizational patterns. Now is your opportunity to turn that list of points into a logical, persuasive, engaging argument that will sway the city council to accept your claim. Using your outline as a guide, write a first draft of the body of your speech.

Answer 48

wait i thinking its slowly making sense sorry, what was the sports thing do you remember?

Answer 49

yes its about whether or not college students should be paid to play sports in college like football or basketball for example. and the second option was whether or not certain books should be banned completely or not.

Answer 50

i remember coming across that but i cant remember what i picked hold on

Answer 51

alrighty :)

Answer 52

ohh is that when i had to do the whole claim thing?

Answer 53

yeah i think so

Answer 54

idk why it's red but this?

Answer 55

sorry it sucks i was kinda rushing it

Answer 56

yes thats it!!!

Answer 57

Yay!

Answer 58

and i think its fine :)

Answer 59

Okay so what do i do now?

Answer 60

yeah you have a good argument

Answer 61

well now which assignment are you on? so that i know what you have to do

Answer 62

Thank you, and 05.09

Answer 63

did you already submit your full argument?

Answer 64

umm i dont think so, i think i skipped it :/

Answer 65

For section 5 this is all i have left to do
05.03B Analyzing an Argument
05.09 Writing Your Argument
05.11 Present Your Argument

Answer 66

it's all about the same thing

Answer 67

yeah when i did it i found that a bit annoying. well for both 5.09, and 5.03b there should be templates in the lesson that way all you would have to do is fillout the page, and then for 5.11 you just submit your final draft for the argument :)

Answer 68

okay, what about this, do you remember this at all?

Answer 69

oh yes i remember this, i struggled with this one at first but then i got it.

Answer 70

what part of it do you have trouble with?

Answer 71

Do you still have it?

Answer 72

let me check

Answer 73

alrighty, thank you

Answer 74

it was for 06.09

Answer 75

i dont have it anymore but i can still help you with it i remember calypso borealis and the other one

Answer 76

Dang :/ alrighty

Answer 77

do you have the introduction ready?or have you not done it yet? for this you are copying and pasting that and making alot of quotations for your body paragraphs explaining what each author means in their story/poem. its a real drag i know but ill help you thru the work best i can.

Answer 78

Is this it?
John Muir and William Wordsworth were two lonely human beings. They both loved nature and to connect to nature, but they were depressed. Nature was what brought them happiness, and took away their depressive state.John and William talked about how nature is beautiful, and included vivid imagery to describe how the beauty of nature helped to change their mindset during their journey.

Answer 79

thats a good intro! copy and paste that to the page you sent me right were says to put it

Answer 80

under number 1

Answer 81

Okay done

Answer 82

good! alright now you write your body paragraphs. and they have to include the following:• a direct quotation introduced with a complete sentence and a colon
• a direct quotation introduced with a signaling phrase and a comma
• a direct quotation that is introduced and explained in one sentence
• a paraphrased example
• an embedded quotation

which may seem like alot i know but you are basically just restating your opinion from your intro paragraph into your body paragraphs. except now your going to put quotes in your body paragraphs and explain what each of them mean. remember that you have to compare how both authors styles and diction (word choice and such) were different or/and similar

Answer 83

for example one author (the one where its a story) was on a journey in search of the flower and then found it right when he was about to give up and finding the flower transformed him. and then there is the one who wrote the poem was not expecting to find the bed of daffodils that he had found but when he did it transformed him also. nature transformed their outlooks in the most positive of ways. thats a good comparison. :)

Answer 84

ohhh Okay i sorta get it

Answer 85

its good that your starting to get it :)
what are you still confused with?

Answer 86

me too and the a direct quotation that is introduced and explained in one sentence
....I think ima take a nap and wake up in like an hour or two is that okay?

Answer 87

thats fine ill still be here :) and while your napping ill send you an explanation for your question

Answer 88

Ahh thank you so much!(: i owe you!

Answer 89

your the best!

Answer 90

its no biggie really! i just remember how i had to do all of it on my own when i did it i had 5 different classes and no one to help me. it was all on flvs. so i understand you alot! now go get some rest! :)

Answer 91

wow im so sorry :( that had to of sucked! and especially when i only have 20 hours to finish everything :/ it's alot of stress but thank you! really thank you

Answer 92

its no problem :) wow you have done quite an exceptional job for someone who has to get it done in 20 hours!!!
now go sleep!
oh and a direct quotation is the most common one. like this "now go sleep", said pi 123 because she knew student_1234 had, had a particularly long day. just for example. you have to explain its mean in the same sentence.

Answer 93

awe thank you! and i have a question, what does this mean?
Part Two
Read the responses offered by one of your classmates and post a thoughtful reply.
Be sure to use sensitivity when responding to your peers. All posts are public and meant to engage in a constructive discussion to learn from one another.
Use proper spelling and grammar, and maintain polite communication skills when responding to other posts.
Part Three
Copy and paste your post and your response to 05.03B Analyzing an Argument.