Hi Taylor,
You have a great start here! However, a strong topic sentence will restate the prompt, include the title and/or author’s name, and then answer the question.
Here is an example for the story “The Cold Equations:”
If the prompt said: Who would you consider to be the antagonist in the story, “The Cold Equations?”
A strong topic sentence might look like this:
In “The Cold Equations,” the antagonist would be Marilyn because she broke the law when she snuck on board the ship.
Try using this as a guide to write your topic sentence, and resubmit. Thanks!
:o) Mrs. McKenzie for Mrs. K

Question

Hi Taylor,
You have a great start here! However, a strong topic sentence will restate the prompt, include the title and/or author’s name, and then answer the question.
Here is an example for the story “The Cold Equations:”
If the prompt said: Who would you consider to be the antagonist in the story, “The Cold Equations?”
A strong topic sentence might look like this:
In “The Cold Equations,” the antagonist would be Marilyn because she broke the law when she snuck on board the ship.
Try using this as a guide to write your topic sentence, and resubmit. Thanks!
:o) Mrs. McKenzie for Mrs. K

anonymous · Answer

okay so i submitted this the pilot is trying to make the right
decision he continially tries to but
he finds none, just like the title suggest! what else do i put?

anonymous · Answer

Are you asking me to help you with it lol?

anonymous · Answer

yes lol please like what else do i write