Question

Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Ashley wanted a puppy. He talked to his family for hours. They did not believe he had time to care for the puppy. Ashley created a puppy-care plan. His family finally agreed.

Answer 1

@beccaboo333 @uri

Answer 2

\(\Huge\frak\color{#ff0c3e}{BUNNY!!!!!!!}\)

Answer 3

Haha
\(\large\frak\color{magenta}{Hai!~\heartsuit}\)

Answer 4

\(\Large\cal\color{#ff1abe}{Can~you~help~me~with~this~question~please?}\)

Answer 5

\(\large\bf\color{lime}{Of~course!}\)
Now, first, do you have any idea where to start on this? (:

Answer 6

No \(\Huge\color{royalblue}{\ddot\frown}\)

Answer 7

Okay, I can help. (:
So what it wants you to do is make these sentences more transitional, or more flowing.

Answer 8

Ashley wanted a puppy. He talked to his family for hours. At first they did not believe he had time to care for the puppy. Then Ashley created a puppy-care plan and his family finally agreed.

Like this?

Answer 9

Yes, but we can do more to it.

Answer 10

I think you can merge the first two sentences more.

Answer 11

do you have any ideas of anything else? i am bad at writing :(

Answer 12

Yeah, possibly something like this:
Ashley wanted a puppy so badly that he begged his family for hours. At first, they did not believe that he had time to care for the puppy. Ashley then created a puppy-care plan, and his family finally agreed.

Answer 13

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Answer 14

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Answer 15

\(\Large\cal\color{magenta}{You're~Welcome!~\heartsuit}\)

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Do you need help with anything else? (:

Answer 16

Nope \(\Large\color{hotpink}{\ddot\smile}\)
\(\bbox [10pt, aqua,border:5pt solid blue ]{\color{fuchsia}{\huge\cal sleepyjess}}\)

Answer 17

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Okay, if you ever need help with anything else, just let me know. (:

\(\Large\bf\color{purple}{\bigstar~Thanks~for~using~}\color{cyan}{OpenStudy!~\bigstar}\)



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Answer 18

would you want to help me teach a friend latex?

Answer 19

Sure! (:
Just tag me *^.^*

Answer 20

ok \(\Large\color{royalblue}{\ddot\smile}\)