Question

Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.
Ashley wanted a puppy. He talked to his family for hours. They did not believe he had time to care for the puppy. Ashley created a puppy-care plan. His family finally agreed.

*Help please

Answer 1

@Sikky

Answer 2

The sentences are already in the order in which the events happen. Start each sentence with a word that alludes to the order. Examples include: first, second, next, then, last. Hope this helps!

Answer 3

thank you @Sikky