Question

The clouds are so gray
On this very day
You kneel down a fold your hands to pray
For just a sight of a sun ray
So you can go out and play
In all the clay
So what do you say
Can you stay
Yay

Answer 1

@Ashleyisakitty @Ashleyisakitty @Alecia0806 @alyssa_michelle1996 @alyssawhaaat @AnnalieseBronz @hugsnkisses @haiimawesome @kisstherains @katie234 @Kaylee_td @Keridavis @Kittymeowb @eflatt13 @Samsonite16 @Whitemonsterbunny17 @kriscoin @ObeySoph▲ @dacutiepie @PassTheSalt @Cydney_Morgan

Answer 2

@katie234 @MeganEdward @mkerr017 @sammixboo @vbryand

Answer 3

I like it, the other poems that I've seen of your have serious subjects, but this one is more lighthearted:)

Answer 4

I like it

Answer 5

well thank you @mkerr017
you know i never really noticed that. thank you for mentioning that and @alyssa_michelle1996 thank you

Answer 6

Sounds great! I agree with @mkerr017 :)

Answer 7

awesome thank you

Answer 8

Np :)

Answer 9

I like it(:

Answer 10

so good ;)

Answer 11

Love this <3

Answer 12

I reeeeaaalllly love your writing! Can't wait to hear more! <3

Answer 13

Just a Shout out to all my followers> I will be signing a release form next week if all goes well. My Uncle Phil Penne http://fineartamerica.com/profiles/phil-penne.html
will be helping me get published. He also writes books and he is the second florida state genius in math< thank you all for inspiring me to work hard and harder< you all are the best

Answer 14

@paki

Answer 15

waoooo nice one... @Marco,Phillip

tag me must in your posts... i will appreciate...

Answer 16

thank you paki
and will do and if every thing goes good ill let you know where you can find the poems

Answer 17

sure....

Answer 18

awesome

Answer 19

wow.....

Answer 20

0_0

Answer 21

@PassTheSalt

Answer 22

Well, I like it very much, just not the yay part. Almost makes me feel like its a joke at the end, is there another word that rhymes for that area? All and all its a very lighthearted happy poem.

Answer 23

Thank you @melanielovee4 for your response. Other people like you is what inspires me to do better

Answer 24

@jigglypuff2