Question

for proofreading.

Answer 1

@RyGuy

Answer 2

do you seriously think that I excel in English?????

Answer 3

Can you read it and find out if there is any awkward sentences?

Answer 4

ok I will read it

Answer 5

I guess black is doing it. :P haha

Answer 6

omg no pls help out.
English isnt my forte

Answer 7

First Sentence gives me a headache >.<

Answer 8

@beccaboo333

Answer 9

o-o You're lucky I'm nice enough to read all this

Answer 10

>_> Or at least half

Answer 11

Trust me, it will be entertaining read

Answer 12

WHAT AM I READING

Answer 13

?

Answer 14

I can't do this. I'm sorry. But whatever this person did when writing it.. Well it's destroying my brain with the amount of repetitions and ongoing sentences. Too much man... Too much.

Answer 15

I gotta agree. Besides for the grammatical errors there are many repetitions.

Answer 16

This is what I have done so far. Too many distractions