Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.
Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. She pulled out her phone to text her friend. Someone on the bus asked her about her phone. The bus arrived at the mall, and Leah got out. She had forgotten her purse! (10 points)

Question

Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.
Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. She pulled out her phone to text her friend. Someone on the bus asked her about her phone. The bus arrived at the mall, and Leah got out. She had forgotten her purse! (10 points)

anonymous · Answer

Leah grabbed her purse as she swung in the direction of the bus door. She slung out her phone and proceeded to text her friend. Someone on the bus quarried about her phone when the bus came to a sudden stop. Leah went straight into the mall never to remember that person ever again, until she noticed her purse was gone....

anonymous · Answer

I thought temporal transitions meant using first,then,next,at last.. am I right? @spray_N_Pray