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Answer 1

@loomely can u please help?

Answer 2

In general it is very good, there are only two things wrong.
1. You said that you liked to go to the theaters to see movies but then you said that you didnt like to leave your home. So I would change it a bit... como ir al cine for como ver peliculas.
2. "porque que puede olvidarse del mundo y presto la atención a la vida charreteras"
first change it to " porque que puedo olvidarme del mundo y prestar la atención a la vida charreteras,"
And I am not sure about whar charreteras means, is the first time I see it. So try to see if you can change or if it is okay.

:) hope it helps

Answer 3

oh sorry I was trying to spell characters
Thank You Again @loomely!!!