Opinions??

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Opinions??

anonymous · Answer

There’s times i knew,
we were meant to be,
from the first time, 
you glanced at me.
I was unprepared,
but sat up straight,
what’s funny though,
is you didn’t wait.
Confident,
head up high,
walked right over,
with the cutest gait.
There were no hi’s,
or how are you’s,
not even cheesy pick up lines.
Just one word,
that stuck with me,
until this day,
this was all
Destiny

anonymous · Answer

looks really good on your wording, nice flow and easy to read

anonymous · Answer

Thank you!!

anonymous · Answer

no problem hun. be inspired to inspire

solomonzelman · Answer

Usually the new line starts from a Capitol, (I think) but the poetry of it is very interesting.
...I would even say Unique

anonymous · Answer

Thank you :)

anonymous · Answer

Oh my gosh!!! I had goosebumps while reading this!!! It's beautiful

You should definitely publish this! Wonderful piece... WONDERFUL

anonymous · Answer

Aww thank you!! @Samantha1lehman if you liked that one, you should check out the one i just posted :)

anonymous · Answer

@Pretty_in_pink let me know what you think :)

anonymous · Answer

Amazing you truly have a talent.. I consider you become a poet...

anonymous · Answer

Thank you!! I'll consider it :)

anonymous · Answer

Good.

anonymous · Answer

@TylerSoSexy

anonymous · Answer

it touches my entire heart ;)

anonymous · Answer

Lmao thank you Tyler XD