Question

In the event that you spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.

Which statement best describes how this sentence can be made more concise.

It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness.

It has a modifier that may be eliminated because it does not add any meaning.

It has a redundant phrase that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

It has a redundant pair that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

Answer 1

English is not my best subject...but I am going to guess on this one..
I think it is the 2nd one.
Because it has a modifier that can be eliminated because it does not add any meaning.

It could easily be written as :
In the event that you spy a tornado, go and seek shelter.

Answer 2

English is a subject, why isn't it. It is about the grammar, no ?

Answer 3

you misunderstood....I said it was not my best subject. I know it is a subject...lol

Answer 4

Ohh, sorry about that

Answer 5

Ok thank you.

Answer 6

whitemonsterbunny17

Answer 7

@whitemonsterbunny17

Answer 8

I agree with @texaschic101