In this lesson, we have focused on using strong and interesting word choices, combining short phrases to achieve complex sentences, and using subordinate conjunctions and absolute phrases. Use these tools to help you write a descriptive paragraph of three to five sentences for the following situation. Use proper spelling and grammar.
Making a friend

Question

In this lesson, we have focused on using strong and interesting word choices, combining short phrases to achieve complex sentences, and using subordinate conjunctions and absolute phrases. Use these tools to help you write a descriptive paragraph of three to five sentences for the following situation. Use proper spelling and grammar.
Making a friend

anonymous · Answer

@Whitemonsterbunny17

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

Okay, so it wants you to write three to five sentences about making a friend.
Do you have any ideas so far about this?

anonymous · Answer

I have no Idea @Whitemonsterbunny17

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

Okay, so think of what it feels like to make a new friend.
Think of ways you can make new friends.
Then type those ideas here, and we'll see what we can do with it. (:

anonymous · Answer

I went to the supermarket and bought somethings I had on my groceries list.Once I left I seen this person struggling with their groceries.Their grocery items fell out the bag and I asked if they needed help.I gave them a hand and picked the items off the floor. @Whitemonsterbunny17

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

Okay, that's a good way. (:
How did it make you feel?

anonymous · Answer

It made me fell great knowing I could help.

anonymous · Answer

feel*

anonymous · Answer

@Whitemonsterbunny17

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

How did it make you feel to make a new friend, though? Happy, right? (:

anonymous · Answer

Yeah.But Im not sure If i added subordinate conjunctions can you take a look ?

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

Well we need to fix more than just that. There's some grammar issues in there too. :p

anonymous · Answer

Yeah I pretty sure there is help me out please

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

Okay, I'll edit it for you.

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

One day, I went to the supermarket and bought some things I needed to buy on my grocery list. Once I left the store, I saw this person struggling with their groceries.Their grocery items fell out of the bag and I asked if they needed help. I gave them a hand and picked the items off the floor. It made me feel great knowing I could help, and not only that, but I was able to make a new friend as well. 

Now, one issue... Was the person a lady or a man? You need to specify more.

anonymous · Answer

A lady so instead of this person Im going to change it to a lady

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

Not just that, you can add more detail.. making it more complex. Such as, I saw this poor lady struggling with her groceries.

anonymous · Answer

thank you @Whitemonsterbunny17

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

You're welcome!

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

Don't forget to choose the "Best Response" @159507nb