How would you write an introduction Paragraph for an arguementive essay about how its not good testing Animals to make sure that its safe for humans?? PLEASE HELP ME I WILL BECOME A FAN AND GIVE MEDAL!!!!
Please help me? ANYONE?!?
You just need an introduction paragraph?
Yes, basically. I'm really horrible at them:/
Okay, so does it specify how many sentences long it needs to be?
Umm i think it said 54-6. Let me double check.
5-6*
Actually i just noticed that it said to make sure it was 100 words or more...
Start it off with, " Testing on animal for human safey is bad because " then list your 3 reasons on why you think its bad
Okay! Thanks lol @ChristinaBatitsas
Okay. So you need to create a thesis, first. Your thesis could be something like "Testing animals to ensure a product is safe for human use is wrong". Yes, then give us your ideas on why it is bad.
Okay. thank you so much. wait so you want me to give you my ideas?
Yeah, so we can help you create the whole thing and ensure it looks great. (:
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:) okay thanks. Umm, well one of the reasons why was that doing those chemical procedures on animals would make them get hurt, die, or give them illnesses. The other reason why was because the The scientists take those animals out of their own habitat. Another one was that those scientists say "If we didnt have aniamls, we would have to experiment on humans", but the thing is that scientists already do experiment on humans.
and okay:)
Okay, so now to make 5-6 flowing sentences out of that.
You could say: Using animals to test products to ensure they are safe for humans is wrong for many reasons. One, by doing such things to the animals, the animals may get sick, hurt, and/or even die. Another reason is because those animals were taken away from their natural habitat for such experiments. By doing so, this can negatively affect the animal's mental and physical health. Scientists claim; "If we didnt have aniamls, we would have to experiment on humans". The irony to that is, though, that they already do have testing on humans.
Thank you!! you really helped me:)
You're welcome! (: You can edit that and change what you want, but hopefully that helped you start or get some ideas. ^.^
Ok! I will. It really did. Thanks!! how do you give medals?? sorry im new.
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