Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

In the event that you spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.

Which statement best describes how this sentence can be made more concise.

It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness.

It has a modifier that may be eliminated because it does not add any meaning.

It has a redundant phrase that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

It has a redundant pair that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

Question

Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

In the event that you spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.

Which statement best describes how this sentence can be made more concise.

 It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness.

 It has a modifier that may be eliminated because it does not add any meaning.

 It has a redundant phrase that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

 It has a redundant pair that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

anonymous · Answer

I NEED HELP .. ANYONE PLEASE

anonymous · Answer

The answer is the second option, because "dark" is an unnecessary modifier.

anonymous · Answer

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