Question

I give you my heart and you tare it to pieces
I hive you my hand and you run it the wrong way
When I ask for your heart you look the other way
But at the same time I give you my love
And hope you cherish my love
Because no one else will stand to be with you.

Written by _Phillip J. Marco_
-_Be Inspired To Inspire_-

Answer 1

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Answer 2

the last part is a little strange lol But other than that, great job! :)

Answer 3

hehe lol puts a twist in their

Answer 4

I guess so...xD lol

Answer 5

This poem shows true love. Loving as if you were never hurt. Great!

Answer 6

lol thank you @quickstudent

Answer 7

What's so funny?

Answer 8

the true love part

Answer 9

I don't understand how a normal person can see love as funny, let alone a poet.

Answer 10

love isnt funny I was laughing to the fact that when i wrote it i wasnt thinking about it being true love.

Answer 11

Oh, ok. well, very nice poem!

Answer 12

thank you

Answer 13

I like it!

Answer 14

simply awesome @Marco,Phillip

Answer 15

that's amazing!! like always!

Answer 16

Amazing you truly do inspire !!!!