Question

How does your thesis relate to your supporting evidence?

Your thesis must work to provide an opposite view point.

Your thesis must contradict what your supporting evidence shows.

Your supporting evidence must support what you state in your thesis.

Your supporting evidence must contrast with what you state in your thesis.

Answer 1

@Prez,,.

Answer 2

C.

Answer 3

@grabadipbass

Answer 4

In no fewer than three sentences, critique the following paragraph. Explain where it could be improved. Then, in your own words, rewrite the paragraph to make its writing stronger. Make sure you include a hook, supporting evidence, and a topic sentence. Use correct spelling and grammar.

Playing in the snow is one of my happiest childhood memories. The winter offers more than a time for kids to have fun. There are many things to do in the snow. It is unfortunate that so many people find the wintertime annoying. More people should step outside to enjoy the snow. I am glad I grew up where it snows.

Answer 5

@wyattp17

Answer 6

i have a ton of questions,... i am over whelmed please help. thank you so much guys

Answer 7

Playing in the snow is one of my happiest childhood memories. The winter offers more than a time for kids to have fun it was a time for us to get together and socialize and just have an all around great time. There were numerous activities we took part in while it was snowing out we did things like make snowmen have snowball fights etc. It is unfortunate that so many people find the wintertime annoying I feel as if winter is one of the best seasons overall. More people should step outside to enjoy the snow. I am glad I grew up where it snows and i wish i could have shared all those great memories i cherish so much with others.

Answer 8

i hope this works guys

Answer 9

remember it said no FEWER than Three sentences... my teacher hates reading long stuff

Answer 10

Write a detailed, five sentence paragraph using one of the ideas below as the central idea. Add examples, details, or facts to support the central idea and prove your point.

Central Idea A: Rollercoasters are the most exciting rides at any amusement park.

Central Idea B: Playing video games is a good way to spend your free time.

Central Idea C: High school classes give too much homework.

Answer 11

lol your teacher is lazy af,.

Answer 12

You got to explain and go more into feeling, use bigger words and add a little imagery. such as this: Playing in the snow is one of the happiest moments of my life. watching the snow glide down as gentle and calm as it could be. the wind could easily pick up and carry it away. snow made me feel like the snow, so happy that my feet could come off the ground and it just send me away. it is tragic that people find snow such a burden, it is a gracious gift, although it can cause some problems but to me it is just outstanding how beautiful and magical it can be.

Answer 13

haha ikr?

Answer 14

yea he went into extra detail lol but he has the right idea though i just added little things

Answer 15

thanks @grabadipbass

Answer 16

ur welcome

Answer 17

haha okay. can you help me with the second one?

Answer 18

?

Answer 19

ill help

Answer 20

yea i can

Answer 21

okay thanks so much

Answer 22

whats the second question?

Answer 23

Write a detailed, five sentence paragraph using one of the ideas below as the central idea. Add examples, details, or facts to support the central idea and prove your point.

Central Idea A: Rollercoasters are the most exciting rides at any amusement park.

Central Idea B: Playing video games is a good way to spend your free time.

Central Idea C: High school classes give too much homework.

Answer 24

i have a bunch of idea's but im not sure what to do

Answer 25

i have like...7 more questions then i'm done

Answer 26

i believe that high school gives too much homework, we as high school students have other obligations. these other obligations include: sports, chores family, other classes, friends, and social life. we have many other classes and when the homework piles up, we as students get overwhelmed and stressed. statistics show that stress at a young age will more than likely cause other problems in the future. serious problems such as health, family and personal problems.

is that good enough for you?

Answer 27

hex yeah! thank you. here are t5he last little bit of questions'

Answer 28

alrighty

Answer 29

for reals!!!

Answer 30

Musical theatre changed my life. When I was a child, I was always a problem for my parents. I never wanted to go to school, study my homework, or do my chores. No one knew how to control me. My mom once said that she was at her wits' end by the time I turned 13 years old. The truth was that I had become insecure, and I hid from my fears by pretending to be too "bored" to do any real work. That was when my parents signed me up for stage classes. Acting and singing not only showed me my true potential, they taught me an essential fact: life is a team effort, and we all have different skills that we use together to make progress. Through lessons, sweat, and tears, my experience of working in musical theatre has helped me become the well-rounded adult I am today. I am forever thankful to my parents for not giving up on me and for sending me to classes!

Which of the following parts of an essay is the section in bold most likely an example of?

supporting evidence

hook

topic sentence

conclusion

Answer 31

nothing is in bold lol

Answer 32

lmao hold on...

Answer 33

i was also in musical theater. js

Answer 34

Um im thinking b its not c or d

Answer 35

hmmmm idk which one

Answer 36

it isnt gonna let me upoen it

Answer 37

dangit!

Answer 38

sorry ma'am i wish i could help you

Answer 39

i have others though...

Answer 40

i got time

Answer 41

yea im here until i gottta go to work :/ at 3:30

Answer 42

What must you show readers in your conclusion?

how to write another essay like yours

why they were wrong in the first place

what they have learned from your essay

when you will be writing a follow-up piece.

Answer 43

i can only be here till 3:20

Answer 44

the 3rd one

Answer 45

nah he is right

Answer 46

i meant the other way around

Answer 47

What does the hook of a paragraph do?

It concludes the essay.

It grabs readers' attention.

It proves a difficult point.

It continues an argument.

Answer 48

B

Answer 49

just like movies, everything is informational, whether it be to facts, life or just a personal insight on how you feel

Answer 50

b

Answer 51

How should your conclusion relate to your topic paragraph?

it should state the opposite to make readers think.

it should provide new information and facts.

it should restate it in as much detail as possible.

it should reflect on it without restating it.

Answer 52

D

Answer 53

d

Answer 54

The secular cooling that must someday overtake our planet has already gone far indeed with our neighbour. Its physical condition is still largely a mystery, but we know now that even in its equatorial region the midday temperature barely approaches that of our coldest winter. Its air is much more attenuated than ours, its oceans have shrunk until they cover but a third of its surface, and as its slow seasons change huge snowcaps gather and melt about either pole and periodically inundate its temperate zones. That last stage of exhaustion, which to us is still incredibly remote, has become a present-day problem for the inhabitants of Mars.

Which of the following details comes from supporting evidence?

There is debate about alien life.

There is no life on other planets.

Earth oceans are very large.

Mars has become very cold.

Answer 55

2nd one

Answer 56

but im kinda also leaning twards the last one

Answer 57

Video games can kill! That is what many who support legislation banning violent titles from underage players have stated. These supporters of video game reform cite studies that show increased statistics of violence among children who play games regularly at home. Opponents of this reform, however, have expressed doubts about the validity of the studies, requesting that further research be done before a dramatic statement is made about all gamers. It seems that the rising popularity of video games among youth has spiked a political debate that may last for several more years to come.

Which sentence from this paragraph is the topic sentence?

"It seems that the rising popularity of video games among youth has spiked a political debate that may last for several more years to come."

"That is what many who support legislation banning violent titles from underage players have stated."

"Video games can kill!"

"Opponents of this reform, however, have expressed doubts about the validity of the studies, requesting that further research be done before a dramatic statement is made about all gamers."

Answer 58

the last one

Answer 59

otay^.^

Answer 60

hah that was cute

Answer 61

thats it! thanks guys. I'll be back tomorrow. Thanks so much

Answer 62

no problem ma'am any time (:

Answer 63

ill probably have my buddy help you, he is just as smart. but i wont be on tomorrow cause i got no school

Answer 64

Oh okay coolio

Answer 65

alright nice talking and i reckon ill talk to you later. have a good day (:

Answer 66

you to byiie=^.^=

Answer 67

pm me