Question

How do you make a really good 7-9 sentence paragraph?

The topic: Pets: Should people own pets?

and it needs to have this: Claim

Support

Conclusion Clincher

Point of View

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Answer 1

@.TH3_M0NST3R. your really good at this.. help?

Answer 2

Yeah, I can.
Do you have anything started?

Answer 3

Yes !

Answer 4

give me a second lol

Answer 5

if you want to do something else you can wait and i can tag you :P

Answer 6

I'm helping someone with Biology in another tab. :b

Answer 7

then gooo :P i'll just tag you

Answer 8

Ok :b

Answer 9

Some people have pets, and some don't have any. First off, someone may not like the idea of having to take care of an animal,Not everyone has the time for one too, but there are many reasons why having some sort of pet if very benifitial. A person can have a disabilty, and they may need a dog or cat around to help them whenever they are at home, or not. They can even use a bird, so it can talk. Also, others have pets, and it is apart of their family. sometimes they even make someone happy! According to science.howstuffworks.com," For many people, interacting with a pet is the ultimate antidote to a stressful day. In fact, when people were presented with stressful tasks in four different situations -- alone, with their spouse, with their pet, or with both their spouse and their pet -- they experienced the lowest stress response and the quickest recovery in the situation where they were only with their pet."

Answer 10

@.TH3_M0NST3R. this is all i have and i'm not sure on what i should put next......

Answer 11

there may be errors
like grammer wise

Answer 12

grammar*

Answer 13

Yeah, I see some.
Umm.. I can edit it in a bit.
Are you any good at Biology?

Answer 14

Sort of, i got a good grade in school! :) and yes of course you can :) Thanks.

Answer 15

Haha okay, I'm helping some random person with an assignment or something and they have like 30 questions left. o-O
After that, I can help with your essay. :b

Answer 16

well, this thiny is an assignment and if i like wait long it like exits and i can't exit bc i'll need to wait until tomorrow bc the teachers are like on from 8am-8pm and it is 9:16 and its summer school...i can try to help you with the other person? like whihcever ones i'm not sure about i can just tell you about ?

Answer 17

thing*

Answer 18

i feel bad :/

Answer 19

oh ok so your essay is timed?

Answer 20

and this is the last part of the whole course... so i can pass. well not timed like, if i leave the page open for a while, then it will log out by itself, then the teacher situation would happen..

Answer 21

Okay.
I'll work on both at the same time, then.

Answer 22

You sure? Thanks!

Answer 23

Yeah, I just checked, it meets all of those requirements.
So all I have to do is fix grammar errors and change wording in some spots.
Btw, what grade is this for?

Answer 24

what do you mean? lol like 9th

Answer 25

nvm

Answer 26

i can do the grammar! bc they have spell check and it's just wording

Answer 27

Actually i think i got it :)...don't worry about it :)) thank you though :) worry about them! you were helping he/she first :)

Answer 28

You sure?

Answer 29

I can check over the final thing for you if you want.

Answer 30

Yea! :) Its fine lol