Can someone please help me!?!?

Revise the following sentence so that it uses parallel structure. Use proper spelling and grammar.

After school, many students play football, reading books, and some relax with video games.

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Can someone please help me!?!?

Revise the following sentence so that it uses parallel structure. Use proper spelling and grammar. 


After school, many students play football, reading books, and some relax with video games.

paki · Answer

you know, what is parallel structure...?

anonymous · Answer

yeah it's placing sentence elements that correspond in some way in the same grammatical form.

At least that's what my lesson tells me.

paki · Answer

yeah rite... please have a look here too... http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/parallelstructure.htm

anonymous · Answer

Okay I understand it a little better but I'm still not sure how to change the sentence the right way.

paki · Answer

i will say it like... 

All students read books in the school and some play football after school timing and some relax with video games...