HI! Can someone edit my essay?

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mckennarian · Answer

Sure!

anonymous · Answer

@MckennaRian RAD! Would you mind using Google Drive?

mckennarian · Answer

Nope, not at all. That's fine.

anonymous · Answer

@MckennaRian uh is there anyway you can dm me your email? or post it and delete the comment?

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

Just some tips when revising an essay:
1. Make sure your introduction "hooks" the reader.
2. Check for capitalization errors. 
3. Check for errors with commas, colons, semi-colons, etc.
4. Read it out loud. If the wording sounds funny, change it. 
5. Check for sentence fragments. If there are any, fix them.

If you need any more tips or help with revising essays, do let me know. (:

anonymous · Answer

@Whitemonsterbunny17 thanks for the tips!! would you mind looking over it? (you seem to know what you're doing)