Question

working on some song lyrics feedback??

Neglected, in the corner of the room
Broken, blamed for eveything they do
Bleeding. oh bleeding out the truth
Help, you gotta help me baby
Oh it's, it's , suffacting me

Poison, it's flowing through my vains
Yes, you are my kryptonite
But you're helping me survive
Wrong and right, babe I'm losing my mind
Darling you're confusing me
Making me go crazy
I'm like a a puzzle missing a peice
Just not complete
So um yeah drop a comment if ya want

Answer 1

REALLY GOOD! I loive it! It's vivid and lively!

Answer 2

Kepp it up, I'd love to see more!

Answer 3

*keep

Answer 4

Thank ya @redeemed1312

Answer 5

No problem:) @Megan1313

Answer 6

sounds good yea !! c:

Answer 7

Thank you it means a lot @kaylaprincess

Answer 8

its cool. what kind of song, i.e. rock,love,country,alternitive.?

Answer 9

yes yes anytime.

Answer 10

Alternative probably

Answer 11

sweet

Answer 12

you should message me!

Answer 13

Proud to say this was actually inspirational and jogged my head for some lyrics of my own..very nice!!

Answer 14

Have you thought of a chorus??

Answer 15

Not quite sure I'm taking a break then I'm gonna come back to it

Answer 16

Well, I like how its going so far. XD

Answer 17

Well Thank you so much

Answer 18

So you play any instruments or just write?

Answer 19

Sounds great to me.

Answer 20

Thanks @perce

Answer 21

Amazing

Answer 22

And @blink182 both 😊