Then, put your details in a brief paragraph using the expository principle “writing to explain.” The topic sentence of your paragraph could be: The beach is an extremely inviting place. What do you see? What can you smell? What do you hear? What foods do you taste? What objects can you feel? As the writer, you must decide what details you want to include about your description of the beach.
i just need help starting it ...
@aryandecoolest : do you think you could help me start this please ?
what is your question...?
i have my topic sentence , i was wondering how should i start before putting in the 5 senses & stuff ...
so basically what should i put after my topic sentence ... ?
start like.. I always loved the beach since I was a child. There is nothing like the fulfillment the beach brings with your toes in the sand, and nothing but the horizon in my perception. The sounds of the waves crashing, the smell of the salty atmosphere, and the relaxation you get from God’s beautiful creation. The beach can be a very relaxing Place to be. There are many things about the beach that make it a calming place. The most obvious things are the sights and sounds, from the ocean and the sandy shores....(and continue )
sounds good , thanks (: this helps a lot .
nice words bro @aryandecoolest
hahaha!! thanks bro @paki
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