Question

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Which revision best corrects the errors in the given sentence?

The animals of Africa such as lions, giraffes, and elephants are surely one of the world's treasures.
A.
The animals of Africa: such as, lions, giraffes, and elephants are surely one of the world's treasures.







B.
The animals of Africa: such as, lions; giraffes; and elephants—are surely one of the world's treasures.







C.

The animals of Africa—such as lions, giraffes, and elephants—are surely one of the world's treasures.

Answer 1

It is C, since the dashes add the extra info 'such as lions, giraffes, and elephants', which you can remove without changing the sentence.

Answer 2

thanks do you think you could help with a few more? :)

Answer 3

Yup, just post a new question and tag me.

Answer 4

okay thanks :)