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OpenStudy (quickstudent):

My newest poem: Love as Experience Read below.

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

In the Ocean of Love, two waterdrops are forgetting their waterdrop-ness. In the Ocean of Love, two waterdrops are becoming one self. In the Ocean of Love, two waterdrops are dancing in the ripple's waviness. In the Ocean of Love, two waterdrops have dropped all identities, except the Water - Love itself.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

OMG It's awesome! And so deep and beautiful and I don't know what to say :')

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

Thank you, Priya Didi:)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I mean, it's really good! And how old are you?

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

I'm fourteen.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

You're just fourteen and writing such deep poems. You are really intelligent.

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

Thank you:)

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

The funny thing is, I never think about these poems, they just flow out of me, like water in a waterfall:)

OpenStudy (destinymasha):

Why are you sooooo good? ;-; I'm jealous. Lolol Great job :3

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

Hahaha, thank you.

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

@M.D.Saxon

OpenStudy (anonymous):

sounds nice:) i dont get teh first sentence tho

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

I'm saying that they are forgetting their egos.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

oh i see cool:P

OpenStudy (anonymous):

its realy good

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

Thank you

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

Amazing c: Truly Inspirational

OpenStudy (camerondoherty):

So much feel and hidden emotion I Just love it

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

Thank you:)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

good

OpenStudy (deepika.comet):

Excellent..!!

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

Thank you, Didi:)

OpenStudy (timaashorty):

Love this one. Keep this up :)

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

Thanks:)

OpenStudy (nirmalnema):

nice poem..!! @quickstudent

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

Thank you, Bhai:)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Amazing poem! *^*

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

Thanks:)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Woah! Beautifully done! Love it. The flow and the wording just jump out at you >_< Way to go!! ✅

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

Thank you!:D

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