Hello,I'm Ooyoshiki,I'm 15 and I 'm from China.I need help writing paragraphs please read this paragraph and give feedback.(keep in mind,English is my second language) Thank you.
P.s. I can help you with Chinese or Japanese language studies.

Now, I'm exercising everyday.And I think it is the time to write a report about my working-out. I like exercising because it can give me a exciting beginning of a day, and make me stronger ,more healthy and keep my style. I always exercising 15 minute for"upper body","core stretches"and"full body stretches"or"standing only stretches".

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Hello,I'm Ooyoshiki,I'm 15 and I 'm from China.I need help writing paragraphs please read this paragraph and give feedback.(keep in mind,English is my second language) Thank you.
P.s. I can help you with Chinese or Japanese language  studies.



    Now, I'm exercising everyday.And I think it is the time to write a report about my working-out. I like exercising because it can give me a exciting beginning of a day, and make me stronger ,more healthy and keep my style. I always exercising 15 minute for"upper body","core stretches"and"full body stretches"or"standing only stretches".

anonymous · Answer

Konnichiwa 
 Welcome to OpenStudy ^_^
*:･ﾟ✧.ﾟ･*:.｡..o○•*`*•.★★.¸¸.•*`*•.¸¸.•*`*•.★•*`*•.¸¸. ○o。. .｡.:*･゜ﾟ

shamil98 · Answer

She's useless so don't listen to this idiot.

the_fizicx99 · Answer

^

anonymous · Answer

Says the useless one
 Says the fool
Says the stale breaded beaver mustard jar -

anonymous · Answer

Says the son of a unicorn -

the_fizicx99 · Answer

am I the "stale breaded beaver mustard jar -"

anonymous · Answer

No
  You're the stale breaded unicorn ^_^

anonymous · Answer

v_v y v_v y v_v

the_fizicx99 · Answer

Please refrain from posting irrelevant replies on a thread that isn't yours. Refer to the CoC http://openstudy.com/code-of-conduct

anonymous · Answer

(lol)

shamil98 · Answer

I've corrected some of the mistakes and tweaked it a bit:

 I've started to exercise everyday now, so I believe it is time to write a report about it. I like exercising because gives me an exciting start to the day , and it also makes me stronger and healthier. I always spend 15 minutes of my routine on upper body, core, and full body exercises.

anonymous · Answer

"because gives me"
 (lol)

shamil98 · Answer

I've started to exercise everyday now, so I believe it is time to write a report about it. I like exercising because it gives me an exciting start to the day , and it also makes me stronger and healthier. I always spend 15 minutes of my routine on upper body, core, and full body exercises. *

anonymous · Answer

HA
 I laugh :')

anonymous · Answer

Sham plz
 What has been seen cannot be unseen

anonymous · Answer

Thank you for helping me ! :)

anonymous · Answer

You're very welcome :')

shamil98 · Answer

You're welcome.
Also click the report abuse button to report this "Anime" person for posting irrelevant comments.

anonymous · Answer

ROFLOUL

the_fizicx99 · Answer

LOL

anonymous · Answer

Oyoshiki wouldn't 
 Oyoshiki has a heart 
He has a kokoro

anonymous · Answer

welcome to OS..