Question

a new poem that edited about life

Answer 1

Thinking back on my life, when I was a little child;
So outrageous and bubbly doing things that were wild.
Thinking back on my life, all those wonderful years;
Not a care in the world, no worries, no fears.
Thinking back on my life, all the advice I was told:
What a wonderful child, my parents hoped they would mold.
But as we all know, it's not always what we dreamed;
Life gets harder, and to us it's not always how it seemed.
There are two roads in life: the right one and wrong one;
The wrong one I chose and it seemed life was done.
But as time has went on, I had to agree;
I can do and be anything I want to achieve.
I have tried over and over and failed to succeed;
But I am a SOLDIER, that's what I believe.
My LIFE is too precious to let it slip away;
I must try harder and harder each coming day.
One day soon, I'll be All that I am;
How do I know you ask?
BECAUSE I KNOW I CAN!!!!

Answer 2

@Jumperman @just_one_last_goodbye @dan815

Answer 3

I just made that a rap song.

Answer 4

But really, it's really good.

Answer 5

thank u...
oh thts really cool...
maybe the poems I write I should turn into song lyrics since I love singing and music is my life... thnx for tht idea

Answer 6

This Is Awesome!

Answer 7

thanks

Answer 8

I really loved reading this. An excellent poem which we all can relate to. I just want to give you a tip which will make this poem even better; Don't capitalize entire words and the "!!!" is unnecessary.

Other than that I have to say great job! :)

Answer 9

thanks @timaashorty

Answer 10

your welcome.

Answer 11

wow!! thats really good!!

Answer 12

thanks

Answer 13

Wow, great poem to learn from!:D

Answer 14

thanks

Answer 15

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Answer 16

Nice.

Answer 17

thanks

Answer 18

The meaning of life is, that life has a meaning. And that meaning, can be anything you want it to be.

Dreams can come true, you just have to be willing to be willing to fight for those dreams and risk everything.

Although there are two paths, it doesn't mean you cant jump to another. If you truly want to, and truly try, you can cut straight through the forest from one path to another.

@MilenaSaeger Hope you like these ideas.
(all mine by the way.)

Answer 19

wow tht is great @Gabebro13

Answer 20

Thanks. I have more stuffs like that. Would be cool if you could put it in a poem like that. I really enjoyed it. And the turning your poem up there into a song would be great. Keep up the good work @MilenaSaeger
:3

Answer 21

thank you a lot

Answer 22

No problem. Thank yu for a great poem.