Feeling poetic to write poetry more. Any criticism welcome :) Draft...

Roses torn, bled under in curves of red.
Stain deep the hearts that they enchant.
Sad they fall as tears often do,
to the sadness only in crisp, morning dew.
Hearts too often flee,
to a haven of fresh death,
awaken, hope, to a morning of savor.
Blood of a rose, has spilt upon the pose,
once held near them to the loves that emptied their souls.
And loss comes sweet over hearts alive, that bleed like roses,
whence there wept for beauty,
thorns shall promise violent ends,
at time's bend, from these violent delights.

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Feeling poetic to write poetry more. Any criticism welcome :) Draft...

Roses torn, bled under in curves of red.
Stain deep the hearts that they enchant.
Sad they fall as tears often do,
to the sadness only in crisp, morning dew.
Hearts too often flee,
to a haven of fresh death,
awaken, hope, to a morning of savor. 
Blood of a rose, has spilt upon the pose,
once held near them to the loves that emptied their souls.
And loss comes sweet over hearts alive, that bleed like roses,
whence there wept for beauty,
thorns shall promise violent ends,
at time's bend, from these violent delights.

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

WOW!!! This is incredible!
I $\large\frak\color{red}{LOVE}$ every detail of this!!! $\large\color{red}\heartsuit$

anonymous · Answer

@Whitemonsterbunny17 Really thank you so much :) I'm glad <3 <3

whitemonsterbunny17 · Answer

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I can see that you have a true talent in writing poetry. 
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