Question

i have one good treasure
i found it,took lot of efforts
always remembered every second by me
loved it a lot
it gave me a feeling of comfort

but
as days passed
the treasure was just for my happiness
it never wished me with genuine love
i am broken now
i have lost the treasure now
now my only wish is
To be alone in my life
far from everyone
deep down in sorrows and pains

but i have a big treasure
who will never leave me alone
who will always b with me,will love me
and that's no one other than

Answer 1

@nirmalnema @Mashy @ikram002p @BSwan @aayushi.somani @xxAshxx @Abhisar @deepika.comet @Gir_lover_♥ @paki

Answer 2

i liked it , its sad but i liked it :o

Answer 3

haha
i sometimes feel it
@ikram002p

Answer 4

nice..one..@rvc

Answer 5

very nice... @rvc

Answer 6

Its amazing!! @rvc its full of feelings n emotions...Keep it up!!

Answer 7

its great :)

Answer 8

thats no one other than...???

hmm

It really a good work @rvc
well done and all the best..:)

Answer 9

thx @deepika.comet @aayushi.somani @nirmalnema @paki @xxAshxx

Answer 10

@rvc:

Seeing this from my perspective(sorry I'm unable to guess you perspective by this poem)...It made think about my multi-coloured past(I'm not that pessismistic to use the phrase 'dark past'..LOl) and it results......

Answer 11

@Abhisar

Answer 12

Good one !

Answer 13

thanks @Abhisar

Answer 14

not bad
deep down in your sorrow, not convincing though nice one