Question

Don't tell me you love me, because I cant.
Don't tell me you care, because I wont.
If the world was perfect, It's not

Forget me, I wont remember you
I wished the heavens for you
Things I cannot offer you

Who am I to shut the door on destiny
Who am I to present you your agony

Why wont you fly?
I have slipped off your bloody wounds
I have lost the heart to step on your wing.
do not fret,
Your broken veins are not beyond repair
stop looking back, this ends your despair.

Go, you are free,
dont look at me with pity
Why cant you see, this is all there is to me
so forgive me

Answer 1

hehe dan xD
*tears*
jk lol ,its nice but hmmm its not like something you would write .

Answer 2

Nice job Dan c;

Answer 3

Don't tell me you can write, because I cant.
Don't ask me for feeedback, because I wont.

:) jokes aside, nice poem danny !!

Answer 4

lol @ganeshie8

Answer 5

omg its awesome... so the best compliment i could give is-- "its better then any of my poems" i loved it.. good job! @dan815

Answer 6

lol : )

Answer 7

still i like ikram's poem more :P

Answer 8

she gets paid for writing poems in arabic
but her translation to english fully spoils the actual meaning of the poem

Answer 9

hehe my rusty english xD

Answer 10

no, nobody can translate a poem to a foreign language preserving all its original content. if you read tagore poems in his original language(bengali), you will understand them much better compared to reading in english

Answer 11

i wish to learn more of foreign langauge , i love Romi , i would like to read his persian ,poem s instead of reading translated , as also i started tolike tagore :o

Answer 12

look at somys pic aww :) lets make fun of her

Answer 13

lol i think i have better things to do :P
+ she will kick ur ** so uve better not to make fun
or ull gonna start to cry bhahahaha

Answer 14

I loved your poem, Ive never seen any of your other stuff but this is good :)! Nice job ;) *thumbs up*

Answer 15

Truth is ringing in my ears
It flows

Answer 16

(๑>ᴗ<๑)
wahhh ❤3❤
why so sad tho (づ￣ ³￣)づ
so like you ( ˘ ³˘)❤

Answer 17

@dan815 Good Old days :P

Best Lines in da poem :
Who am I to shut the door on destiny
Who am I to present you your agony

Answer 18

I....Just.....Teared......Up.........Oml