Question

a translated poem

Answer 1

what do i tell u, what do i tell u
that my heart doesn't stick (anywhere) is true
you know what about the love of mine
i am waiting for you with the wine
you are my heart-pink u are my sky-blue
what do i tell u
that my heart doesn't stick (anywhere) is true

you live in my heart and you don't know my condition
my heart cries for u,such are you a magician
from my life till my death ,i will follow you through
this heart now has no sunshine
you know what about the love of mine
i am waiting for you with the wine
you are my heart-pink you are my sky blue
what do i tell u
that my heart doesn't stick (anywhere) is true

silent is my hug, silent is my patience
come baby my breath is looking for your fragrance
where to go now ,i don't have any clue
with you i was on cloud nine
you know what about the love of mine
i am waiting for you with the wine
what do i tell u
that my heart doesn't stick (anywhere) is true

Answer 2

Nice poem, do you have a question?

Answer 3

thanks

Answer 4

sure! can you do more?

Answer 5

more ?means

Answer 6

More poems

Answer 7

ya when i have time

Answer 8

Thank you! Mention me when you have made one :) I also fanned you

Answer 9

ok..
is their any defect in my poem

Answer 10

No your poem was amazing!

Answer 11

really thank u

Answer 12

Sure!

Answer 13

can u tell me how it feels a little sad or anger or any such emotions in it

Answer 14

It sounds like both

Answer 15

It sounds like unrequited love, which brings about frustration and desperation.

Answer 16

may be you are right i think...........

Answer 17

thanks for your comment

Answer 18

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Answer 19

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Answer 20

i agree with annaliese, it kind of gives me the feeling of that but points out that someone loves and cares for someone but cant get to them. like a love that cant be defined

Answer 21

or lost love idk

Answer 22

thnsk for ur comment :)

Answer 23

Daaamn!! @mathmath333 i love this poem actually.. just wondering why does it repeats :3

Answer 24

cuz it is a poem and it repeats as the poet is repeatedly saying something

Answer 25

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lljJub4C09k check this out

Answer 26

also your poem was great.

Answer 27

Very nice poem

Answer 28

thanks :)

Answer 29

this is very pretty !

Answer 30

thnks :)