Question

Beautiful life,
Beautiful home,
But it doesn’t feel right,
When I’m alone.

Won’t you stay with me?
Stay right here.
Oh please, hold on to me.
Until the sun disappears.

These blanket don’t do much.
Oh, love I get so cold.
I’m numb to the touch,
This feeling is so old.

Just hold on to me,
Won’t you never leave?
Just stay with me,
Cause your all I need.

Answer 1

@TinkerbellGirl @mlb004 @Monica75 @TylerSoSexy @ilovehim121511 @DessieMomsen @aryandecoolest @eliasperez191 @country_princess @nirmalnema @madrockz @Katwin_ @LearningIsAwesome @Ambbiiee @freethinker @jessicatucker @Roszell<3 @yanee @DangerousJesse

Answer 2

woowww u do poetry ??? (:

Answer 3

that actually spoke to me, that was AMAZINGG!!!!

Answer 4

I was asking because I do poetry also ! lol btw it was very nice (:

Answer 5

@yanee Yes i do c: & thanks so much
@country_princess Yay! I'm so happyy

Answer 6

wow :) i really really like this! your amazing!!! @GabbyCakes

Answer 7

you should do actual publishing, because that is really good, and for you to be able to write that and it touch people like me and others that is really great, hopefully one day you will publish books, and i will buy them if i can!! promise

Answer 8

@Roszell<3 Ahhh, thanks! I'm so happy you do :)
@country_princess I love writing. I know it sounds out there, but i plan on becoming a singer& writer,

Answer 9

you should because this was amazing, when i was 8 i was raped so i understand all of this for years i thought about how my feelings could be expressed and you expressed how i actually do feel..

Answer 10

good one

Answer 11

that is reeeaaallly nice.

Answer 12

@country_princess Oh wow, i'm so sorry. & im so happy i wrote this now cx
@mathmath333 thanks c:
@ilovehim121511 yay! :D

Answer 13

i am terrible at poetry.

Answer 14

here is my poem u can take a look

Answer 15

http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/54085face4b081860be0a678

Answer 16

thank you its okay and thank you for writing it

Answer 17

@mathmath333 Will do!
@country_princess my pleasure

Answer 18

\(\huge \cal \color{Green}{Nice \ work}\)

Answer 19

@aryandecoolest thanks! It means a lot c: