Question

i need to add new suspense to the story ''charming billy''

Answer 1

how like with ideas of what

Answer 2

have you read the story?

Answer 3

yes a while ago though

Answer 4

it has been a while

Answer 5

well my teacher asked my to write like a sentence or two of suspense in that story since theres barley any but i cant seem to think of any.

Answer 6

add something like he finds another love but she is in a bad crash and takes a bad hit to the head or she becomes deaf or even blind or have a twist

Answer 7

that would be the best I could do

Answer 8

um i dont think we're talking about the same story

Answer 9

I meant he finds a love and she gets in a crash or something