Question

here is my song

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=83R4k9y2Q6k

Answer 1

it sounds good, i like it!!!
one thing, it was a little hard understanding you because i couldn't hear you very well,
and also be careful with the mic and speaker making offset noises because every now and then i'd hear like a weird fart noise ??lol
if those things were fixed up more i'd definitely would listen to the song more often and maybe subscribe to your channel.
You seem to give off the genera of indie\folk influences\electric pop which is my favorite stuffs man !!! you'd get a lot of attention and fans if you keep going and improving. i hope to see more !!!!!

Answer 2

those weird noise are voices I recorded with garageband that why it sounds like that

Answer 3

no you misunderstood, i'm talking about one certain noise ~

Answer 4

I like it

Answer 5

I... that... tuning T_T

Answer 6

This is great! and yeah. One thing is that you want your voice to stand out just a bit more. Make your voice louder or make the music quieter so people can hear your voice! It sounds great!

Answer 7

You're really good. :D

Answer 8

Just to let you all know that it was recorded with garageband

Answer 9

and there more music coming and it going to sound better

Answer 10

i love it

Answer 11

It was good but I agree with @kaylaprincess I could hear something like a fart every so often...and it was kind of hard to understand you