Question

I wanna know if this a great introduction?

We should all have on person knows how to bless us despite the evidence, grandmother was that person to me. I'm going to talk about my grandmother, we call her "Mama Juana". She was born in June 20, 1920, so she is 95 years old. Her nationality is Mexican, was born in Leon Guanajuato. My grandmother is one of my greatest aspects in life. She help me a lot through life. Without her, my life would be very miserable; helped me in life and education.

Answer 1

I think you could fix a few things. Overall it's pretty good. (You can change it, just this is an example)

We should all have that one person who knows how to bless us despite the evidence. My grandmother was that person to me and I'm going to talk her. We call her "Mama Juana". She was born in June 20, 1920, so she is 95 years old. Her nationality is Mexican, was born in Leon Guanajuato. My grandmother is one of my greatest aspects in life. She help me a lot through life. Without her, my life would be very miserable. She helped me in life and education.

Answer 2

we have to have this??